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German德语: überwachtes Exemplar

English英语 translation: controlled copy






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German德语词条或短语:überwachtes Exemplar
English英语翻译:controlled copy
输入者:Jessica K.
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German德语至English英语翻译 [专业]
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German德语词条或短语: überwachtes Exemplar
This is in reference to a Quality Management Handbook. It basically means that this handbook may only be read and kept by authorized employees/departments, and may not be passed on to anyone outside this authorized circle. Is there a standard term for this?
Jessica K.
美国
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Danjela: 16:25 Mar 5, 2005: Jessica - could you please give us the whole german sentence, please? -
Jessica K. (asker): 18:48 Mar 5, 2005: Danjela, there is no sentence here. There is a choice of "Überwachtes Exemplar" or "Informationsexemplar" on the cover of the handbook, either of which can be checked or left unchecked.
Danjela: 20:26 Mar 5, 2005: Okay - so I don't see why it should be confidential. I still think that this choice concerns the distribution of the book, either the one to whom it is given will have the next revision of the handbook, too (überwacht) or not (if it is only for info. -

controlled copy
说明:
Another possibility:
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XYZ COMPANY recognizes its responsibility as a provider of quality products/services. To this end, XYZ COMPANY has developed and documented a quality management system. The quality system complies with the international standard ISO 9001:2000, Quality management systems - Requirements. This manual provides comprehensive evidence to all customers, suppliers and employees of what specific controls are implemented to ensure product/service quality.
This manual also governs the creation of quality related documents. It will be revised, as necessary, to reflect the quality system currently in use. It is issued on a controlled copy basis to all internal functions affected by the quality system and on an uncontrolled copy basis to customers and suppliers. It may be issued to customers on a controlled copy basis upon customer request.
http://www.qsinnovations.com/samplequalitymanual.html

Can someone give me an ISO or QS interpretation definition of what is a "Controlled and Uncontrolled Copy" I would like to know when a company should consider what they must control and what they can consider for reference use only.
A Controlled copy is always at the correct/latest revision level. When a change is made, it is retreived and replaced.
An Uncontrolled copy is a bit harder to get you hands around, and is where the variation comes in. Other than it is not replaced when a new rev is issued.....it could mean anything.
http://elsmar.com/ubb/Forum7/HTML/000005.html

Each individual issued a controlled copy of the EMS Manual is responsible for maintaining a current version, and for the manual's safekeeping.

Uncontrolled copies of the EMS Manual may be distributed outside of WSU's EH&S (e.g. other activities, departments, facilities or other interested parties either internal or external to WSU). All uncontrolled copies are to be marked "Uncontrolled-For Reference Only".

http://www.ehs.wsu.edu/esrp490/documentcontrol.htm
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Kim Metzger
墨西哥
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I am selecting this answer as "controlled copy" has a high number of relevant hits in Google, all of which support the idea here. Danjela, I fully agree with your interpretation of what an "Überwachtes Exemplar" is, but it seems that "controlled copy" is the standard term used in English.
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所提供的全部ENGLISH英语翻译如下:
4 +1monitored copy
SwissTell
3 +2confidential copy
cis-med
5registered exemplarDanjela
4controlled copy
Kim Metzger
3 -1examined copy
Jo Mayr


  

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47分钟   信心度: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 同仁同意(净值): +1
Ueberwachtes Exemplar
monitored copy


说明:
the type of "for your eyes only"

SwissTell
美国
专精该领域
母语: German德语
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同意 Danjela: Qualitätssicherungshandbücher werden verteilt und die Personen/Firmen, an die es verteilt wird, werden registriert, das ist hier mit Überwachung gemeint, lediglich die Verteilung. Das hat den Zweck, dass Revisionen dann ebenso verteilt werden können.
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1小时   信心度: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 同仁同意(净值): +2
confidential copy


说明:
Although "monitored copy" is a correct literal translation for this, I am wondering how a handbook can be monitored, so this is a suggestion in regards to what this term actually seems to stand for.

cis-med
美国
母语: German德语
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同意 BrigitteHilgner: I am not aware of a standard term, but this should make clear what is meant.
3小时
  -> Danke, Brigitte

同意 xxxJeffFish: If it appears on the cover or in a header/footer, you can just say "confidential"
5小时
  -> Thanks, Jeff

不同意 Danjela: normalerweise sind Qualitätssicherungshandbücher absolut nicht vertraulich. Ihr Sinn und Zweck ist es, Interessenten und den eigenen Mitarbeitern zur Verfügung gestellt zu werden, damit jeder über die "tolle" Arbeitsweise informiert wird.
6小时
  -> Der Text deutet aber an, dass dieses Handbuch vertraulich ist

同意 Kim Metzger: I'm with you, Renate. If a copy is confidential it is subject to controls. "Monitored copy" just isn't something native speakers would readily understand.
9小时
  -> Thanks, Kim
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9小时   信心度: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 同仁同意(净值): -1
examined copy


说明:
eine Möglichkeit

Jo Mayr
德国
专精该领域
母语: German德语

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不同意 xxxJeffFish: has nothing at all to do with the context, sorry.
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11小时   信心度: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
controlled copy


说明:
Another possibility:
---
XYZ COMPANY recognizes its responsibility as a provider of quality products/services. To this end, XYZ COMPANY has developed and documented a quality management system. The quality system complies with the international standard ISO 9001:2000, Quality management systems - Requirements. This manual provides comprehensive evidence to all customers, suppliers and employees of what specific controls are implemented to ensure product/service quality.
This manual also governs the creation of quality related documents. It will be revised, as necessary, to reflect the quality system currently in use. It is issued on a controlled copy basis to all internal functions affected by the quality system and on an uncontrolled copy basis to customers and suppliers. It may be issued to customers on a controlled copy basis upon customer request.
http://www.qsinnovations.com/samplequalitymanual.html

Can someone give me an ISO or QS interpretation definition of what is a "Controlled and Uncontrolled Copy" I would like to know when a company should consider what they must control and what they can consider for reference use only.
A Controlled copy is always at the correct/latest revision level. When a change is made, it is retreived and replaced.
An Uncontrolled copy is a bit harder to get you hands around, and is where the variation comes in. Other than it is not replaced when a new rev is issued.....it could mean anything.
http://elsmar.com/ubb/Forum7/HTML/000005.html

Each individual issued a controlled copy of the EMS Manual is responsible for maintaining a current version, and for the manual's safekeeping.

Uncontrolled copies of the EMS Manual may be distributed outside of WSU's EH&S (e.g. other activities, departments, facilities or other interested parties either internal or external to WSU). All uncontrolled copies are to be marked "Uncontrolled-For Reference Only".

http://www.ehs.wsu.edu/esrp490/documentcontrol.htm


Kim Metzger
墨西哥
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母语: English英语
此类别中专业问题的积分: 107
提问者给回答者的留言
I am selecting this answer as "controlled copy" has a high number of relevant hits in Google, all of which support the idea here. Danjela, I fully agree with your interpretation of what an "Überwachtes Exemplar" is, but it seems that "controlled copy" is the standard term used in English.
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1天6小时   信心度: Answerer confidence 5/5
registered exemplar


说明:
sorry if I insist but I am working in a quality department and know a little how quality assurance or management handbooks are handled :))

They are given to customers or inspection agencies, potential customers and of course to the own staff (not to everybody but everybody can and has the right to get one). The diffusion is controlled what means that there is a register/calendar where you can see (the diffusing personnel) who has got one and in case of revision the concerned people get the revision, too (and have to give back the old one).
Good luck!

Danjela
德国
在该领域工作
母语: German德语

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中性态度 Kim Metzger: I'm sure you know how QM works but you've got a few problems with your English: diffusion/diffusing (distribution), "the own staff" = in-house staff, "what means" = which means, "the personnel who has" = have
11小时
  -> Kim, I know that my English is far from being perfect but I did not know that only native speakers are allowed to talk English here. Moreover I don't understand what you mean by "the personnel who has"=have ... but that's not important
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