Mar 21, 2008 14:43
17 yrs ago
Chinese汉语 term
新加坡
Business & Legal Translator
Native in: English英语 (Variants: UK, US, Singaporean) 
Works in: Chinese汉语译成English英语
安全性产生
Chinese汉语译成English英语
商务/金融
商务/商业（普通）
项目的建设仍旧具有一定的经济价值，据估计主要包括：
将促使提升经销商销售业绩每年约2000万美元，本项目对提升经销商销售业绩作出的贡献分摊按业绩的10%估计则每年
有200 万美元效益；
将提高客户使用机器过程中的安全性每年产生约10 万美元的价值；
This appears in a table that follows the above text:
提高客户使用机器过程中的安全性产生的贡献
将促使提升经销商销售业绩每年约2000万美元，本项目对提升经销商销售业绩作出的贡献分摊按业绩的10%估计则每年
有200 万美元效益；
将提高客户使用机器过程中的安全性每年产生约10 万美元的价值；
This appears in a table that follows the above text:
提高客户使用机器过程中的安全性产生的贡献
Proposed translations
(English英语)
Proposed translations
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24分钟
William He
新加坡
新加坡
Native in Chinese汉语
Works in field
新加坡
20Years! MBA & Localization Pro!
Native in: Chinese汉语 (Variants: Traditional, Simplified)
Works in: English英语译成Chinese汉语, Chinese汉语译成English英语
Related KudoZ points
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12
Selected
FIY
Totally agree with Wenjer, 安全性产生 should not be considered as a whole meaningful phrase. maybe we could understand the source as contribution from improving the operation safety of machine by customer. Only for your refernece!
Note from asker:
| Thanks. I understand where you are coming from. I took "产生" as a verb in the first place, but I just feel that something is weird here. |
Peer comment(s):
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orientalhorizon
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Thanks, Orientalhorizon!
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Malcolm Mayfield
: if 安全性产生 were to be considered a "term" for translation, one shudders to think what else might be in store.
1天 1小时
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Thanks, Malcolm!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
+1
7分钟
Duobing Chen
中国大陆
中国大陆
Native in Chinese汉语
Specializes in field
中国大陆
Specified in Technical & engineering
Native in: Chinese汉语
Works in: English英语译成Chinese汉语, Chinese汉语译成English英语
Related KudoZ points
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32
+1
31分钟
Revenue resulted/generated from improved safety in machine operation
For your consideration.
19小时
chica nueva
Native in English英语
Works in field
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Native in: English英语 (Variants: British, New Zealand)
Works in: Chinese汉语译成English英语
Related KudoZ points
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60
安全性生产
安全性生产
+1
1天 23小时
the contribution generated from increased safety in the client's process of using the machine
I think you are looking for translating the whole thing, not just taking words out of the sentence and dwell on them?
Contribution here is definitely for "value" or "revenue".
"Generated" here I think also mean "derived from".
Contribution here is definitely for "value" or "revenue".
"Generated" here I think also mean "derived from".
+1
2天 12小时
Malcolm Mayfield
美国
美国
Native in English英语
Specializes in field
美国
Pro translator/editor since 2000
Native in: English英语
Works in: Chinese汉语译成English英语
Related KudoZ points
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56
derived from... safety
contribution derived from enhanced safety of customers using (our) machines (or "using machines purchased from us")
contribution derived from enhanced customer safety during machine operation
[A dollar value could be attributed to this "contribution" based on historical litigation cost and liability exposure.]
contribution derived from enhanced customer safety during machine operation
[A dollar value could be attributed to this "contribution" based on historical litigation cost and liability exposure.]
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