Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
initial paperwork
Chinese translation:
当初填写的资料
Added to glossary by
clearwater
Oct 28, 2008 05:28
15 yrs ago
English term
initial paperwork
English to Chinese
Social Sciences
Sports / Fitness / Recreation
club members retention
"We have an entire system of what we say and how we say it," Page says. "We don't say, 'We miss you, where've you been?' Because it just reinforces the fact that they're paying for nothing. The script now goes something like, 'I noticed on your {initial paperwork} when you joined, you said you were interested in x, and I wanted you to know we have a class on Wednesday and would love to invite you in for it. I'll be here, ask for me.' We have found that the more calls we make like that -- proposing alternatives and solutions and scheduling them for appointments or another assessment -- the lower our attrition rate goes."
Proposed translations
(Chinese)
4 +3 | 入会时填写的资料 | dd dd |
4 +3 | 在最初加入(此健身房)時所填寫的個人資料 | y_lewarne |
Proposed translations
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入会时填写的资料
不一定是个人信息,也可能是有关你的身高体重,或你对什么项目感兴趣,或你想通过运动达到什么效果之类的信息。
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Comment: "谢谢!"
+3
7 mins
在最初加入(此健身房)時所填寫的個人資料
FYI
Note from asker:
非常感谢! |
Peer comment(s):
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oceano
13 mins
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Thank you!
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Jinhang Wang
1 hr
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Thank you!
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agree |
Frank Wang
: 在健身房,可以说“办会员卡”,但不能说“入会”,因为健身房不是会。在个人加入时,无论填写什么,都是个人资料(不是个人资料是谁的资料?)。
3 days 21 hrs
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