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Denyce Seow

新加坡

1852 questions

Silverstein 氏标准本品

Chinese汉语译成English英语医学医疗（总称）

吸收性止血绫是依Silverstein 氏标准本品为国际上目较为理想的止血材料。

Proposed translations (English英语)

Duobing Chen

Denyce Seow (asker) Nov 3, 2008: Thanks for the explanation, Vincent! :)
orientalhorizon Oct 31, 2008: Yes, I think so. The product is up to Silverstein's criteria, thus a good hemostatic material.
Denyce Seow (asker) Oct 31, 2008: Definitely makes more sense but I don't think "Silverstein 氏标准" is a proper term. I believe I will need to translate it as something such as "Silverstein's criteria".
orientalhorizon Oct 31, 2008: 吸收性止血绫符合Silverstein 氏标准，是目前国际上较为理想的止血材料。

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Duobing Chen

中国大陆

1108 answers

Native in Chinese汉语

in accordance with Silverstein Standard， the product

吸收性止血绫是依Silverstein 氏标准，本品为国际上目较为理想的止血材料。

Note from asker:

I thought so too, but I wasn't comfortable with the sentence structure. And isn't "目较为理想" wrong?